On the beach.

Posted on 7 Jul, 2008 9 comments

The sand is wide
with low tide;
the beach
can reach
a long way.
Dogs will play
I run my hand
on the warm sand
it feels so good
I’m in the mood.
The wind is balm
the sea is calm.
The sun is high
in the sky
the plane above
a sight I love.
The river at the end,
just around the bend
hosts crocs and fish
I do not wish
to meet.
Instead I greet
the birds at sea
and they like me.
Then I turn around
and hear the sound
a screetching bird
is heard.
Palms sway
my way
pleasing my eyes
and I realise
I am in paradise.

Marguerite.
June 2008.
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It looks better centred, but there is no option to do it here. Today I thought I just place one of my poems about nature.

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Amy

Thats lovely Marguerite ,heavenly

7 Jul, 2008

Chrispook

You are a very talented poet Marguerite.

7 Jul, 2008

Raquel

Wonderful, Marguerite! I was thinking of including poetry in my blog but you beat me to it! =)

7 Jul, 2008

Mikec

Thanks for posting your peom Marguerite. VERY enjoyable reading :)

7 Jul, 2008

Clarice

Very good i enjoyed reading it.

7 Jul, 2008

Mikec

LOL, I wrote peom. A poem is a poem but a peom is a REAL GOOD poem :)

7 Jul, 2008

Marguerite

Thank you so much for your appreciation and I have to smile about Mikec's one. I love writing poems and most are about nature, the world around me.
I will put some beach pics here too, so you can see what I mean. I will put some more up another time. I am really flattered by so many members reading it.

8 Jul, 2008

Blodyn

Sorry I got to read your poem a bit late, but it's wonderful. As I was reading it I feelt as if I was actually on that beech, and it did feel like paradise. I read it a few times. I enjoyed it : )

8 Jul, 2008

Marguerite

Thank you Blodyn, that really is a compliment.

8 Jul, 2008

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